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Old 02-08-2011, 10:22 AM   #1
Jack-Pumpkinhead
Thunderan Thespian
Join Date: Feb 2011
Location: Cape Girardeau, MO
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Hey guys, I thought I'd post this for critique and whatnot. This wasn't so much fanfic as me thinking out how I'd revamp Thundercats. I mixed the old show with the Wildstorm comics and some of my own thoughts, while keeping a few things I personally enjoyed, and answering some details that the old show left out (why is it called 3rd Earth? Why did no other alien worlds try to help Thundera?) I thought I'd post this and see what you guys think. Please let me know if these are good ideas, crap, or some mix between the two.

Thundera’s history
Numerous warring tribes joined together by warrior-king Jaga (ala Arthur), created Sword of Omens
Eventually joined IPF, single-handedly halted Plundar’s goals of conquest, allowed Snarfs to immigrate to Thundera
Lion-O’s grandfather Megatereon killed great-grandfather Cougartha to assume throne, began war w. Plundar
Claudis defeated his father w. help from Jaga and Grune
Grune becomes power-hungry, goes on rampage, banished to outer space
War w. Plundar continues even though Thundera becomes unstable
Claudis tries to evacuate Thundera, only saves few thousand and dies saving Lion-O. Race scattered

Plundar’s history
Numerous warring tribes, tend to backstab each other
Eventually agreed to shaky peace with goal of universal conquest
Loss to Thundera halted advance, signed treaty
Attacks by Claudius’ father shattered treaty
Entire naval armada attacked royal convoy fleeing Thundera

Third Earth history
Originally our Earth
Mumm-Ra Egyptian priest, sold soul for power only to be trapped in Black Pyramid, buried under desert
As time passes, Mumm-Ra explores universe via astral projection, sees Eye of Thundera’s power
Majority of magic leaves Earth as belief dwindles
Millions of years later, humans explore/colonize planets, helped to found Intergalactic Planetary Federation
Earth becomes uninhabitable, IPF try to restore Earth, dubbed “Project Second Earth”
Numerous races (wolos, balcans, berbils, Tuskans) immigrate to Earth to help in re-terraforming.
Meteor crashes into Earth, causing numerous disasters, nearly destroying Earth. IPF abandons terraforming plans for Earth (unaffectionately called Third Earth)
Recent cataclysm unearths Black Pyramid and reopens magic channels.
Only humans left on Third Earth are Amazon, Hammerhand’s crew, & isolated towns (Little to no technology on planet)

Heroes
Lion-O Late teens/early twenties
Heir to throne, descended from Jaga the Great
Trained since birth to be leader, but training never completed
Optimistic, kind, adventurous, loyal, occasionally rash and naïve
Sword of Omens-fires magic blast (last resort), calls Thundercats, allow sight beyond sight
Cat’s Claw-swingline, shield, claws for climbing, holster for sword

Panthro Twenties/Thirties (oldest of main Thundercats)
Noble from Western Tribes famous for ninja skills
Has natural talent for martial arts and incredible strength, but prefers mechanics & engineering
Patient, most patriarchal, protective of inventions
Nunchaku-Contain fire & ice pellets, tend to be tinkered with

Tygra Early Twenties
Father was General & friend of Claudis
Childhood friend of Lion-O, trained as architect and designer, great agility
Analytical mind, near genius intellect, sometimes arrogant
Bolo Whip-splits into 3 lines, genetic markers render Tygra invisible when tied around him

Cheetara Early Twenties
Noble from Central Tribes, youngest child of family
Natural speedster and psychic powers, master tracker
Kind, playful, somewhat insecure, flirts w. Lion-O & Tigra (prefers Lion-O)
Super-speed, good combatant
Bo-Staff-Extendable, good for pole-vaulting and melee

Wilykit Early Teens
Lion-O’s cousin, Wilykat’s twin
Excellent sneak, responsible twin of the two, bossy
Playful, responsible, curious, has crush on Panthro
Agile, decent combatant, trickster, slightly smarter
Hoverboard-built by Panthro
Pellets-gas, oil, lariat, flashbang

Wilykat Early Teens
Lion-O’s cousin, Wilykit’s twin
Excellent sneak, adventurous twin of the two, short temper
Playful, adventurous curious, has crush on Cheetara
Agile, decent combatant, trickster, slightly stronger
Hoverboard-built by Panthro
Pellets-gas, oil, lariat, flashbang

Lynxo Thirties/Forties
Scholar on Thundera, lost eyesight when Grune attacked
Computer genius, historian, other senses heightened
Calm, ingenious, secretly depressed
Discus-doubles as shield, returns to Lynxo, blinds enemies with reflection

Bengali Late Teens/Early Twenties
Apprentice to blacksmith, hates Thundercats because Grune killed his parents
Master forger and metallurgist
Brave, honest, but short temper
Strong, good brawler,
Hammer-holds electric discharger, extremely durable

Pumyra Early-Mid Twenties
Young doctor, began apprenticeship just before Thundera exploded
Expert herbalist and doctor, likes Bengali and can calm him
Gentle, compassionate, naïve
Agile, quick
Sling-throws pellets similar to the Thunderkittens

Snarf Forties
Hired as Tutor/manservant to Lion-O
Has some skills in first aid and stealth
Kind, protective, overbearing sometimes

Jaga Fifties/Sixties
Childhood friend of Claudis and Grune, commander of Thunderan army
Compassionate warrior, entrusted with Sword of Omens, shares name with Jaga the Great
Wise, strong, compassionate
Weapon-Sword of Omens
Mental Training allowed soul to transcend death

VILLAINS
Mumm-Ra Immortal
Aid to ancient pharaoh, lusted for power and sold soul
Longs to one day rule universe and usurp Ancient Spirits
Deceitful, Cunning, Power-Hungry
Can fire energy blasts, increase physical power (decreases magic power), change shape, control minds, create astral projection, can view past and present via magic cauldron

Slythe Reptilian mutant
Leader of Reptilian clan
Strategist, Power-broker, overbearing personality
Strong, fearless, conniving
Weapons-Sword, mind-altering warp gas

Monkian Monkian mutant
General of Monkian Tribe
Strongest, fairly agile, dumbest of group on Third Earth
Weapons-mace, shield with mini-cannon

Jackalman Jackalman mutant
Chief of Jackal Pack
Fast, cunning, backstabber
Weapons-spear, club

Vultureman Vultureman mutant
Engineer exiled from Vulture Flock
Smart, resourceful, arrogant, weakest member
Smartest, limited flight
Weapons - laser gun (spotty) and taser (spotty)

Grune Thundercat turned Destroyer (former friend of Jaga and Claudius)
Lusted for battle, hates Jaga and Thundercats
Banished to outer space, eventually died, revived by Mumm-Ra
Strong, resourceful, but quick to anger
Weapons-Battle mace

Hammerhand Cyborg Pirate
Only interests are money, food, and self-preservation
More of nuisance than real threat
Resourceful, Relentless, One-track mind sometimes, strong
Weapons-Cyborg Arm of super-dense metal, Cutlass, Laser Pistol

ALLIES
Hachiman Twenties/Thirties
Samurai revived by Mumm-Ra, but broke free from control
Follows bushido code of conduct to a fault
Very similar to Lion-O in abilities
Weapons-Thundercutter-magic sword, can only be wielded by Hachiman, will not kill righteous person

Willa Early thirties
Queen of Amazons
Strong, independent leader, master tracker, not trusting of others
Respects Thundercats, but prefers to work alone
Skilled hand-to-hand fighter, Agile
Weapons-bow & arrow, dagger

Mandora Mid-twenties
Regional detective in Intergalactic Defense Bereau (Branch of IPF)
Nicknamed Evil-Chaser for commitment to justice system (married to job)
Serious, Stubborn, compassionate with cold exterior
Martial Artist
Weapons-Hoverbike, Laser pistol, Energy cuffs, Boomerang

Eye of Thundera
Ancient Thunderan stone infused with mystic power
Empowers select few Thunderans, cause of many battles
Embedded in Sword of Omens by Jaga the Great after uniting the tribes
Entrusted to next Lord of Thundera
Growls when in presence of new Thundercat and at birth of next Lord of the Thundercats
Originally all Thunderans presented to Eye at puberty to see if they were eligible for Thundercat, but eventually changed to only Nobility



Thunderan Biology
Basic structure similar to humans, but evolved from felines instead of monkeys
Due to genetic throwback, some born with snout, prehensile tails, or enlarged ears
Basic senses more sensitive than humans
Naturally agile and flexible
Some have talent for magic or telepathy
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